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Jefferson, who drafted the declaration, asked Franklin to edit it—see {604295}. This phrase was suggested as a replacement for Jefferson’s original: “We hold these truths to be sacred and undeniable.”
See {642956} for an example of Franklin’s changes.
Jefferson, like most authors, chafed with the changes made to his “masterpiece.” He had earlier asked Franklin to edit the document who did so lightly—see {604295} and {642956}